Originally Posted by lildisco
Because i was asked to by the owner of the site. Due to things happening in my personal life, i was not able to proof read & edit like i wanted to do. This was 'rushed' into the public eye before it was proof read or edited. It can be edited later to correct my horibl gram3r mistacs & punktuation 4 thos who r moar pikey than oth3rs. It was posted & haven't really looked at it since.
I will take your criticism under review & make changes accordingly.
You did fine, given circumstances. His criticisms would be better placed if this was Jalopnik.